Chapter 2 is in the books!

So I'm just finishing up day 4. And I finished chapter 2. I'm really happy with where the story is heading so far. Lily and Willis are very likeable character (I think)

If you're following along at home (click here to become a member and read new chapters as they go live) give me some feedback? What do you think of the setting? Did I go to heavy on the slang and dialect of the girls? Do my characters have enough personality? What else can I do to improve?

If you're also doing NaNoWriMo. Share your progress and successes as well!